Understanding a Character's Impact

I was learning to understand the impact of characters in a story.  One thing that worked for me was that I didn't make any mistakes in my work.  Next time I could actually ask for help if I get stuck.

Show Don't Tell

I was learning was learning how to use the Show Don't Tell strategy.  I found this a little bit hard.  The hard part was when I kept making a lot of mistakes because I found it hard to concentrate.  Overall I think the writing was interesting and fun.

                                        I am learning to write about what our special place is.My special place                                         is the pool because I think the pool is a comfortable place to swim and                                          have fun with your friends when you are board.